Healing a broken heart ♥


Friday, March 13, 2009
at 8:24 PM

as you might have guessed . yes i have another story to tell :D .
this is the story i wrote for miss quek , i hope she doesnt criticise me like usual .
take a look at it .



Many years before he became an instructor in a training school , Akira had himself once been a student under a wise old master . Akira , young and nonchalant , as anyone would expect , had been quite a handful . Arrogant to the point of being disrespectful , he paid little attention to Old Master's lessons . Instead , he daydreamt , and thought of skipping the class to go to his favourite place - The Beach .

He was often mesmerised by the beaches and the shimmering water , the grains of sand sifting between his toes , the warm sun tingling on his back . He would sit along the shore and write beautiful poems in the sand , proclaiming the devotion and love he felt in his heart towards the wind , sand , sun and sea . Having written his poems in the sand , he would delight in seeing the ocean's lapping waves , embracing his lyrical tribute as the tide came in .

Akira longed to swim among the boundless sea , but his parents insisted that he'd be totally prepared once the Grand Match arrives in time .

As Akira's class was taking a break from an agility course , Old Master approached him with an offer that would morph his life forever .

"Young Akira ," Old Master murmured solemnly as he made his wayward student .

"I know that you dream of the sand and waves . And that you care little for training . But you should understand your parent's wish that you'd be properly trained in martial arts ." He went on , closing his eyes and sounded as if his heart was faraway in a distant place .

"And so , I'll make this offer to you . Next week , we'll be having preliminary martial arts examinations . Should you pass your examinations , I shall grant you a week holiday from training . " Old Master's hollow voice etched in Akira's mind .

Though it was because of the rewards that Akira's eyes grew wide with amazement , like a splint of fire had been ignited from within . He couldn't believe Old Master's offer . However , Akira self-assuredly recovered from his brief daze of astonishment , and replied .

"Master , your offer is most appreciated and generous . I assure you that I will not only pass your examinations , but I shall , too receive the highest scores in our class ." Akira declared , his eyes every so willing and convincing .

Driving by visions of frolicking on the beach and jitters about not being able to back up his boastful claims , Akira approached his lessons with frenetic vigor . Together with voices in his thoughts , distorting the scarred fear in his heart , the remedy for his paranoia , Old Master , his convalsence for the wounds that hindered Akira .

As he trained with new intensity , the aging Old Master could see the sparkle of passion in his eyes .

"My young Akira , it seems that you have learnt a most valuable lesson . If the martial arts keeps one from the beach , then one must bring the beach to martial arts ." Old Master pronounced , his breaths deferred .

True to his words , when the time came , Akira passed his martial arts examinations skillfully . Although he did not receive the highest overall score in his class as he had predicted , the fact that he was among the top three in every category earned him great respect among his peers .

So then , Akira was off to spend his blissful week on the shores . Thinking of a week's freedom , tears welled up within him , and tears leaked out his eyes . However , his happiness was short-lived .

There goes his holiday as a cacophonous guy , who looked seemingly tenacious and hefty . Unlike Akira , who was flabby and indecisive , that guy somersaulted infront and came to a halt . His eyes were brewing with paroxysm , towering high about Akira , he demanded for a battle .

Akira backed off in partial fear , trapped between courage and anxiety , he'd knew he had got to act fast . In a split second , he soughted out his thoughts , embracing himself for a match , he reminisced .

"Bring martial arts to beach like how one has did ..." A familiar voice echoed in his sea-deep mind .

"If it's a fight you want , then you'll get it . Let's have a match of wits and wands against brute and brawn ." Akira focused wholeheartedly .

As he punched , he imagined the prevailing waves crashing onto shore . When he blocked with great dexterity , he thought of the beautiful palm trees swaying in the breeze . Each time he knocked his opponent down with a dire leg sweep , he envisioned the appalling currents pulling another hapless victim into the undertow . As he jumped high in the air and knocked his opponent down with a slam , he envisaged the malevolent storm receding as the sun etched up .

His opponent was knocked unconscious and he retained his freedom .

Akira did a backflip and stood on a cliff , contemplating his beloved coastal shores . This would be the first of many battles for the valiant Akira .

Akira leaped victoriously on shore and wrote a poem on it . It says ...

"Writing a story of my life one moment at a go ;
I have learnt everything about something and ,
Align Centersomething about everything .
If life'd be a game , it would be scissors paper stone ,
replaced by brains , beauty and brawns ,
brains would beat beauty and brawns no matter what went wrong ..."

And so , Akira continued his lifestory and though he still spends majority of the time writing poems and playing on the beaches , he does so with the readiness to defend his revered pride , if should the need ever arise again ...


- THE END - =x

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